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Wednesday, 8 February 2017

extra edition : Karen's diary


t/n : thank you to deathwarror and Johnconstance for help me on chitose diary also to the one who encouragement me too. i will try my best to make my TL simple and understanding .


after this i don't know if i will be able to tl main story . this extra edition is first person view and it easy to translate.also main story was triple the length then extra edition.


thanks for reading.




editor:
joshua roqueJohnconstance , TheDefend

Extra edition Karen's diary

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△  month 3rd day


....What the heck.


During a tour through the city streets, I bumped into a man and got directly kissed on my lip.


I tried to hit that man but I stopped in halfway through after thinking that I'm the one who's at fault here from not being aware of my surrounding.


But no matter what, he stole my first kiss and I was embarrassed by that. Because he took my first kiss , I had him worked as servant for 3-4 hour .


..... Surprisingly , it was fun to walk around with him.


See you aga--


N- No, nothing.


△ month 10th day


This is the worst day in my life today.


The army of Elsass Magic Empire have came to invade my territory.


The number of army are 600,000.
(t/n:chronon translations say at v2 c7 it 500,000. but in raw say 500,000 and 100,000 reserve )


There was no hope of victory for me.


I immediately gave an order to request reinforcement from the Capital , but I don't know whether this Fort city will last until the reinforcements arrived.


.....will they even send reinforcements?


Most likely, there will be no chance of victory even when the reinforcements managed to arrive in time.


Well, whatever.


.....I wonder, what will happen to me.


The face of man the other day, flickers in my mind.


Just remembering that made me a bit embarrassed .


I was more girly than I had thoughts.


△ month 11th days


The beginning of worst day, I got a report that an army of 600.000 of the Elsass Magic Empire Army has begun besieging my city wall .


Before the battle start, a messenger from the empire came and demanding us to surrender.


.....wait, they don't say that if we surrendered we won’t be harmed.


The eyes of the messenger was covered with lust when he was looking at me.


The messenger decided to go back by himself.


△ month 12th days


Intense/Fierce fighting continues.


It Makes me very uncomfortable.


△ month 13th days


The morale of soldier has fallen .


It's no wonder, because the fight is between 600,000 and 20,000.


A desperate force ratio.


Right now, it’s a miracle that we managed to hold for few days.


..... Well , the truth is they were just testing on us.


△ month 14th days


As soon as the empire began to take it seriously , the gate of the outer wall that we managed to hold up until now has fallen.


I had prepared myself that today might be the last day of my life.


......... incredible things happened right now.


The man who stole my first kiss come to me with soldiers I’ve never seen before to help me out.


I can't believe it!


I will definitely be dead if he doesn't save me.


I was quite surprised to see that man’s face at a time like this.


After the battle, there was a chance to talk with Kazuya (the one who stole my first kiss) alone... while his subordinate was nowhere to be seen near him to disrupt us.


But Kazuya was surprised to see me too.


I thought..... you came here to save me because you took my first kiss.


..... I don't want to let you die just to save me.


At this moment, I completely fell


B-but,but!


This idiot didn't came here because of me!!


Without thinking about it, I punch this guy as hard as I could.


Hmph! serves you right!


△ month 15th days


A loud explosive sound accompanied by a shockwave jolted the whole fort city.


The third wall had a massive open crater in it.


It’s over.....


When we are in despair, Kazuya repelled the Imperial Army.


Kazuya is too gentle.


.... I'm going to help him with my private army.


△ month 16th days


I received a report that the kingdom army is on its way here ,I'm glad to hear it .


But....


The enemy's aerial fleet and the aerial fortress appeared in front of us.


It’s obvious that we can’t hold it anymore.


I tried to be a bait and hope that I can create a chance for my people to run away from this city.


i was surprised again by Kazuya.


As soon as Kazuya muttered towards a box-like object, the enemy was wrapped in fire.


In addition, an army that has never been seen before have appeared out of nowhere.


I asked Kazuya how he did all this.


He splendidly evade the issues.


Oh well, but I won't let you off next time.


As with Kazuya’s behaviour, most likely is that he has some kind of high status from powerful country or organisation.


I was wondering how to fill the differences in status, but it saved me some trouble.

(john.ED: Well a royaltypaired with an unknown adventurer/soldier is not the best romance story for the aristocrats.)

With this we can be together soon.


I can hardly wait for that time.


...... The diary is cut off here.
(t/n : if you see any mistake please tell .)
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35 comments:

  1. ah,someone suggest me to disable swipe horizontaly on mobile. i lack of knowledge about design blogger and how blogger work. i really appreciate it if someone help me

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    1. can kazuya zummon mechas robots or androids from the future war s..
      kasuya can make a city in space pr a laser from space to blow the empire ass

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    2. kazuya can summon the star wars fleet and destroy all the god who annoying him. he invade another dimension and all girl to be his harem . there no one can oppose him even god scared to him.


      just kidding

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    3. Isn't his cheat a "modern weapons" cheat?

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    4. Modern weapons limit to year 20XX weapons, maybe will reach exoskeleton suit.

      but if they research magic + modern weapons , will they be able to create mobile suit? they already got flying battleship!!

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  2. you should translate the main story too :)

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  3. How do i send edited chapters? I want to help edit this. Should i use micro soft word and you would just paste it?

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    1. Ahh sorry sorry removed my own comment.
      I Have send you the edited chapter. Hope it helps :)

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    2. thanks for work editor-san

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    4. LoL I missed a few lines.
      well its not noticeable :3
      Also no problem. Also I hope you translate that very first extra from the captains Pov. :)

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  4. There's correction needed but it's readable.
    Thanks for the extra chapter!

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  6. "Without thinking about it, i punch this guy as hard as i could.

    Bah, serves you right!"
    sweet sweet punch !
    thanks for the chapter

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  7. Nice. Thanks for the chappy, keep up the good work.

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  8. Okay, can you use google doc? I can help editing if you can

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    1. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_tKU3AQGjKxfvsl3bWCTs0kWVX5Jt0awZnCoRdD-r5w/edit#

      ok, done. do you have anything i can contact you with?
      discord/steam/googlechat/etc

      I've leave things on suggestion mode so you can see the difference and just need to approve ALL of it before you can copy paste it here

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    2. i will compare it with joshua roque and Johnconstance .

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  9. The diary seems didn't finished. Is the diary have a continuous ? (Sorry, my english is not good)

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    1. this chapter already finish. like other diary.

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  10. Thank you for sharing your work with us.

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  11. Typo:
    but I don't know wether this Fort city will last until the reinforcements arrived -> but I don't know whether this Fort city will last until the reinforcements arrived

    Thank you for the chapter.

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  12. Oops. I missed several things. Sowwie

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  13. no prob I probably missed that as well.

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  14. actualy, Johnconstance already fix that part. i forgot to change it. and it should be didn't not disn't. sry.....

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  15. Thanks for the Chapter~!!!
    I hope that you translate the main story as well~

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  16. ohh dont worry i accidentaly clicked s instead of 'D'

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  17. Definitely looks better this time. Good work.

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  18. thank you for the chapter... please translate more of the original story also if you can.

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  19. Thia kinda cute unlike other scary yandereish diary lol

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  20. Thanks for doing this extra!😄

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